I will wait for her

by Fsams   May 14, 2007


Like an angel she came to my life
With lots of desire I wished her to be my wife
I didn't know whether she loved me
But surely I carried a torch for her

In the still of the night
When the giant waves fought
I kept dreaming about her
About the day she would be mine

But a bird came and took her away
Before I could proceed on my way
It's my fault I delayed to propose
And now the inevitable has happened

But I'm still satisfied
For I see her in my dreams
Though I don't talk to her
I talk to her in my dreams

Though I miss her much
I always wish her luck
I'll still wait for her on my way
Holding my emotions till the doomsday

Written by Fsams
22/04/05
Thursday 18:36

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    This poem is so touching n lovely. I ENJOYED reading it.
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The feelings behind this piece was great and the mood you set was very well done. The structure was good and all and all I enjoyed reading it Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    Lmao this is awesome. I can totally understand what you are saying. Loved the rhymes and the way you have structured it.

    Great
    For
    Sure

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Greatly penned, the poem started off satisfactery getting stronger as it went, and ending it off with a very powerful stanza. The poem was amazing, though, to imporve, you might want to work on the stanza,

    "But I'm still satisfied
    For I see her in my dreams
    Though I don't talk to her
    I talk to her in my dreams"

    all in all, great poem!

    5/5

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