Numb

by tinkerbell   May 14, 2007


My hearts become so numb
i cant feel your love
or your tender touch
betrayed my heart has chosen to close the door
shattered in pieces, scattered on the floor

i deniyed myself the facts
thinking i could carry on
but my heart can take it no longer
silent tears fall from these watery eyes

i feel like im alone in the dark
scared, alone, tired, not knowing the unknown
not knowing whats around the corner or what life has in store for me next

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle. 5/5 for sure
    p.s. : Tinkerbell rocks :D

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    'Numb' Good word to use. Very true. I really like your poems (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    The last stanza is great. I like this poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by NightKeeper

    It is pretty good. I just think that you should space it out more to fix the flow of the words. Other then that you get your emotion across wonderfully!

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