Good poem i liked it it had alot of emotions in it ... on of ur best i think

I love it. It totally fits the way i feel about my boyfriend!

I really like how you write exactly what you feeling and never try to force it to rhyme. A lot of emotions in it and just being real. Amazing poem! 5/5 Keep up the great work! :)

Love feels the way u want it to feel.. i very much enjoyed this poem... 5/5

The emtion was strong, and the message was clear, Another well done job by you. 5/5

The message portrayed throughout this poem was clear and meaningful.I found this poem to be quite sweet and cute portraying love nicely. Well done with this good effot~Mel

For some readon this poem made me laugh not becasue it stupid.. for some reason it connected to me and my first boyfriend.. it reminded me when I was young.. I really liked it becasue most poeple was able to realate to that and the flow just moves .. it made me feel like calling my ex.. lol

Wow!...great work...beautifully portrayed love thru this one....the message was conveyed in a simple n effective way..n the flow was good too...n thepoem over all...is sweet!
Kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Hah how many times have i heard a poem like this mix it up a bit sweetheart and do something nrw