Darren

by Franziska   Apr 17, 2004


It was a normal day, actually
everything was alright, actually
you seemed to be OK, actually
but were you?

You came to school this morning
as normal
you didn't say hi to anyone
as normal

You were as sad as every time
you always were kind of depressive
but should we have known
what would come

you were dressed all black this day
that wasn't normal
you watched all of us
really strange

Then there was this guy
he said some things about you
I know
that really must have hurt you

but i still can't understand
you came to the English class
there he sat
he started joking about you again

you usually just walked away
but this day you said
shut up
after that he hit you very bad in the face

the next day you didn't go to school
we understood why
even when you were away this guy couldn't stop joking about you

You hadn't have that many friends
I know
actually no one in the school
I always felt sorry for you

the next day
you came back to school
in black again
in English lesson again

everyone sat there and looked at your blue eye
this guy laughed
then i saw you cried

you just sat in the classroom
and started to cry
everyone was looking at you
the teacher came in

he asked what was up with you
you slowly stood up
and said you're tired
tired of living such a life

you looked in my eyes
I saw all the pain in you
that kind of scared me in a way
this guy looked to the ground now

the teacher told you to relax
you just stood there
and put your hand in your bag
you took a gun out of there

some pupils started to scream
you kept crying
I was shocked as all the others
you held the gun to your head

and closed your eyes
the teacher kept talking to you
you didn't seem to hear it
I didn't either

...then you shot...

your body fell to the ground
I started to cry either
the screams were louder and louder
blood were all over

I've lost you
my brother
now all of the pupils pretend to be sorry

they're to late now
I have loved you
as my brother
we weren't always friends

and i know it was so hard for you
but I'm missing you so much
mummy and daddy are missing you too, Darren!

but it's too late now

*The characters and the story aren't real, but I think it's an important subject that some people commit suicide because they get riled by someone! Please vote AND COMMENT, PLEASE!!!!!*

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  • 20 years ago

    by Tina

    This is a really intense poem and i love it.. its very true and extremely sad.. it kind of reminds me of a song called Hero by Superchick if you ever get the chance listen to it..its really good! another great poem keep up the great work!