Yuppp everyone is equal...ur rite no one should b picked on cuz there different!!!i think its better to b different then b like everyone else!!!!!but i love da poem!its great!!

The message was good but your use of grammar really needed some attention. I think also if you would unfold your message in a series of exsamples or metiphore your work would hold alot more Power. I agree with you and your message but I think if you were to do the same poem in about 5 years into the future you would say OMG I did this. Take care Plot121

This is totally TRUE!!! I agree with the basis of this poem 100%! 5/5 from me, true to what you're trying to say, enjoyed the poem!

Good work kyle...u've tried to improve a lot in this poem...good try!...the message u've tried to portray is good...but i think u can sure do a lot better!....n i knw u r trying!..lol....Kp it up!..

Well done! and yeah everyone is equal! keep writing! good job!

That was a great poem ,full of truth and lots of heart felt thoughts that run deep in your mind ,I can relate to you .I know how you feel .me I look for people with a heart, thats what make them not there looks, great job, your friend Tracy~5/5~

Excellent poem.
What you were saying is brilliant. You're right, Everyone should be treated as an equal.

There was a few grammer errors, but nothing too serious. Maybe you could improve it by maybe puting some rythmn or something in it.
Anywho, imma give you 5/5 because i loved what you were saying!
rebeccax

I agree with the other people, just work on your grammer, and it's great.

~*Alex*~

Im sry you feel this way
but plz dont put yourself down like that
the poem was good
the structure not so much