Comments : You killed her.

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was good. my only thing i see is.. maybe you can put it into stanzas that seems to always work.. lol anyway good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Amazing poem, touching yet beautiful......loved the writing and the format

    ---lots of love tara

  • 16 years ago

    by handsome

    I truly love this poem...it tells a lot of your love for your mum...great piece of work...keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I really like this one... its very touching... <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

    Chan
    -xx-

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Aw, very sad but you did a great job.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Brought tears to my eyes. So sad. your
    poems are like stories. It sucks that you
    have to feel pain to write good and i feel guilty liking your poems , you know what i mean? i hope you uderstand. cy

  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    Wow this is realy good i presume the reason you wrote this is as is in the poem??(if that makes sense) u yea i liked it iv been having a ruff time with my parents at the moment but my teachers at school are helping me heaps so its not so hard....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Aww.. this poem is so sad, it makes it good, How is it going? I'm feel so sorry to you... it had so much emotion, it was brilliant, loved it..... it's so touching...

  • 16 years ago

    by Katlette

    WOW... I really like it!! It's sad but amazing!!! Great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Madelaine

    Awww..Thats so sad! But great writing! Kepp it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by john whalley

    Very good :)

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    I remember writing this a long time ago..
    ah. some things still havent changed.