The dream

by Fsams   May 15, 2007


I was lost
In a forest
It was so cold
I couldn't hold

There was no vision
Ears to listen
I felt shivering
Something nearing

It was a black coat
Which was very short
It came near
I felt with fear

It made a clap
And gave me a slap
Suddenly I got up
Mother told me to shut up

When I realized
I was traumatized
It was a dream
I just screamed

Written by Fsams
08/07/03
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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    This poem was really good but it doesn't fit it the funny section. then again i wouldn't know where to put it sorry.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. the rhyming was very simple
    yet still so effective, how do you
    come up with all these. nicely done,
    thought it was great. 5/5

    nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Ha ha ha this is very hilarious. The rhyme scheme is so simple but beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was an ok poem. I didn't think it was funny untill the very end of the poem and I don't think that, that many people would be able to understand it because of the way it is worded. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was rather delightful to read.
    It had amused me at the least sense.
    =]

    Be well.

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