Awww...very sweet...n soo true...u've put in this 1 soo beautifully....very very lovely work.......the flow was flawless n the write just perfect!!..good wrk
xxPoojaxx

Wow, this was another great one by you, you seem to write right from your heart that s why they are so amazing, keep it up dear.
another 5/5 from me.

Great poem. The only problem was that the flow was a little off. Maybe if you were make the sentences about the same length that would help. Other then that It was a very nice poem. I gave it a 5/5.

This poem is enhanced by the imagery in the middle followed by a sentiment of desire

A sweet poem which was nicely penned hold stong emotions and very vivid imagery. Enchanting. You pulled of a cliche topic really well im amazed. Good effort ~mel

I truly admired the sincerity of your compositions. It is something which always enchants me when it comes to reading poetry.

Nice work.

-Marian