Again

by BreeAnna   May 16, 2007


Its something I cannot control,
it happens on its own,
and when I get that feeling,
I step out of my safety zone.

My face turns bright red,
my cheeks are on fire,
I wish one day it could be more,
but right now you are my desire.

I feel so out of control,
vulnerable and weak,
my mouth is moving up and down,
but I am unable to speak.

I believe in heaven,
serendipity, and fate,
but where is this going,
I feel I can hardly wait.

Tommorrow is a new day,
I will start over new,
but while I run my daily errands,
my mind is stuck on you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    This is very very very nice. I loved the way it sounded. The rythm you kept was amazing. I can picture someone speaking this aloud to me. Your ending I liked alot. You stated "I feel so out of control,
    vulnerable and weak,
    my mouth is moving up and down,
    but I am unable to speak." which I thought was a really brillant combination of words very affective because often a time I feel exactly that speaking to beautiful girls, get kinda nervous and stutter a bit lol. Good job BreeAnna! I will check in again as always -chris

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Again? yeah always...stuck rite... he he lol.. u captivated ur feelings well with a nice flow. gr8 5/5 keep up the gudwork

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a great poem because everybody can relate to it. we've all had those moments where we tried to say something but the words never came out. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very nice poem. I am going through something just like that. Another 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!Amazing..this 1 is soo perfect...emotion is portrayed in a strong yet different manner...n usage of simple yet strong words have added to the depth..Good wrk!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

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