My unanswered questions

by BreeAnna   Jun 11, 2007


This weird feeling of hope washes over me,
when I see you day or night,
but deep down I know we will never be,
and I wish so badly that I wasn't right.

If you look to the right,
beauty, perfection, and flawless you will see,
but when you look to the left,
average, simple, and plain will be me.

It hurts me to look at you,
because your smile makes me weak,
I want to play it off,
but when I move my mouth I cant speak.

If you were to choose me,
inside beauty you would find,
funny, sweet, and all around girl,
and most of all kind.

If you choose me,
I promise to try my best,
I can make you so happy,
go ahead and put me to the test.

I am not perfect,
not the closest you will ever get,
but its whats inside that really matters,
thats what most guys tend to forget.

Over time you will come to realize,
that outside beauty vanishes over time,
If you would prefer inside to out,
then I would love to make you mine.

It is time to wake up now,
this dream is too much for me,
but before I go here is a thought for you,
there is more then the eye can see.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Over time you will come to realize,
    that outside beauty vanishes over time,
    If you would prefer inside to out,
    then I would love to make you mine.
    ^^^i loved these...it just stands out to me thru out the poem...it's so true....it's the inner beauty tht matters....

    i liked the way this one flowed...smooth..
    the choice of words added to the power the poem held..

    great job m'dear
    5/5
    kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i liked it, it had a great flow the structure was good and over all the poem was awesome. it was meaningful and true.
    my fave stanza ^_^
    Over time you will come to realize,
    that outside beauty vanishes over time,
    If you would prefer inside to out,
    then I would love to make you mine.

    it is so true what it says coz outside beauty never lasts forever. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word choice was simple yet effective, the emtion was clear, and strong, the flow was amazing, really this is well written, wonderfully penned. So true to life, I believe it is what's on the inside that counts, as well for beauty is only skin deep. 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was good. I liked it. It had a nice flow, the word choice was good, and I liked the format you used. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by bleeding limegrenn

    Hey great poem my favoret part" If you choose me,
    I promise to try my best,
    I can make you so happy,
    go ahead and put me to the test" anyway 5/5

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