You

by BreeAnna   May 16, 2007


The lights are getting dimmer,
the halls are getting quieter,
I don't know what this feeling is,
but my heart is feeling a whole lot lighter.

I heard about you from friends,
and didn't think it was true,
could it actually be,
that someone existed like you.

Around you I was myself,
funny, stupid, and smart,
but around other people,
we both hid in the dark.

I could not see your face,
I didn't know who you were,
where was the guy I met before,
gone by now I am sure.

The day you come back to find me,
and see me for who I am,
is the day that my prayers were answered,
god sent me a decent man.

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  • 16 years ago

    by George

    It was a very nice message, sentimental and inspiring images. However, some of the flow was a bit difficult to manuever around...pretty good though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. I enjoyed reading it. It is a nice write. Keep up the nice work:) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    No, I have found no man yet. but thanks!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    Good job, i love it! good to see you found a decent man :) keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    The first stanza was really off, the flow was
    Umm... how do I say? Rocky? No, just off.
    Second stanza, darling, amazing :]
    It was really simple to me.
    Sometimes it could be good.
    Sometimes that could be bad.
    For this poem, it was kind of both.
    I loved that it was simple.
    But there was no mystery into it.
    Other than that.
    It's sweet.
    4/5?

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