SHOT

by rachelle   May 16, 2007


It was a foggy moring and i could tell something was going to go wrong i was scared and as i waited at my bus stop i doze of
"sally u going to get on" o yeah i said and as i was walking up i slipped and fell it hurt so bad "are you ok" yeah im fine i said even though i wasnt i felt something dripe down my leg even though i couldnt see it i knew it was blood i felt like crying but i didnt not at all and as i got to skool all eyes we on me and it grew very very quit and i as soon as i got up to my friend i ask her what are the looking at and she point to my pants they were covered in blood the tears i was holding bac began to fall down my cheek like a river and then the whole skool shook i was scared BAMerything went black and wen i woke up i was in the hospital i didnt go to skool for a long time and i have this scare and we moved and i dont know why but i heard its because i got shot and almost die

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  • 17 years ago

    by sian

    This is really good I like the lay out of the poem as well. xxx