Life In Eternal Freeze.

by Crystal Gaze   May 17, 2007


Sweeping green trees,
kissed by a clear sky.
Lovers white as snow,
caress the open blue we all know.

A clear time so beautiful,
captured in eternal freeze.
In this portrait no one can tell,
if on this day there was a breeze.

This picture I now hold,
is nothing like what I saw.
I realize now the camera,
could never capture the true beauty
of experiencing life in itself.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is beautiful....I absolutely love this piece...the imagery you portrayed here created beautiful vivid pictures in my mind, and the flow is flawless throughout the piece.
    Simply beautiful work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Why is the rating low this is really good
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was ok but i didn't really like it, it had so much meaning but you cannot capture life, the title did not suit the poem, and i just don't know, 4/5 sorry

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Imagery was vivid and clear, the emtion was powerful, the flow was great and the word choice was excellent. A job weell done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryce

    Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem, i like to write short poems because it gets the read thinking, and the title has no use to the poem, its just a George Orwell book that has a lot of meaning... i have other poems you should check out.

    I really like this poem you wrote, it feels colorful, for some reason, well keep in touch.
    -Bryce

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