Short and sweet! You rhymed very well. I could tell you put alot of heart into it. ~Take care

I love your poem keep up the great writing!

Cute.
i liked it.

Awww... how cute!!!!i loved this peom it was so sweet! and i can really relate to it.. keep it up 5/5... hope you will read and comment some of mine... it would be nice to see what ou think.. Kirsty Palmer xx

Very enjoyable read for me. I like the quick delivery in each and every line. Loved the emotion. Keep up the writing!

Short and sweet... i loved it

I really like this one, its short, but very cute. keep it up

Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!

I love it....i can somehow relate to this...but this great!!!

Exelent! I love it! -sniff-

Awsome job
Sunshine

That is so cute i love it!

This is really good ! keep it up!

Only in our dreams we can be
Its funny how you poem is totally about me
LOL, nice work. Keep it up!

I really like but I think you should add more to it cuz like as i was reading it i thought of like 2 more lines to put on the end but other then that its really good!!

Very good, i wish I could write like that, so simple but so passionate, great wrok.

Thats it your on my favorites list !!!

I love this it reminds me of a song
< IF ONLY IN MY DREAMS> i hope your
dream becomes real you sound like a romantic so don;t give up love is the only
thing worth dreaming for cy 5/5 on this beautiful piece