Your word choice came over me so powerful...this is an emotional fantastic poem...Im sorry for u and the girl for you two not together...u can feel ur feelings in this. I hope she read it. But like im told it is all for the best--if it is meant to be it will be someday. Beautifuly written--cant wait to hear more recent ones
This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams!