Comments : Ode to a Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Very good..i lvoed the flow also it was just such a cute poem.it painted this beautiful picture in my mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I really enjoyed this peom, mainly because it has a beautiful flow to it..... an interesting read and I look forward to reading more poems from you!

    Favourite stanza was:
    Whisper softly
    The words I never heard
    You never understood
    Just how I felt

    5/5
    Chan
    -xx-

  • 12 years ago

    by HD

    Your poem is beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by manda

    Wonderful poem it is really sweet....

  • 12 years ago

    by manda

    Wonderful poem it is really sweet....

  • 12 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. that was a beautiful piece of poetry. it's a sad end though. loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Emma

    Love this. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    I've only read good poetry tonight and this is no exception.

    wonderfully written.
    loved it!

    keep up the good work:)

  • 12 years ago

    by nering

    Your word choice came over me so powerful...this is an emotional fantastic poem...Im sorry for u and the girl for you two not together...u can feel ur feelings in this. I hope she read it. But like im told it is all for the best--if it is meant to be it will be someday. Beautifuly written--cant wait to hear more recent ones

  • 12 years ago

    by Richard Alan

    This was really good, it really sounds like you write directly from the heart... not dressing up anything too much, and that's admirable! 5/5 Keep writing and your freed desires will help fulfill your dreams!

    Cheers,
    Richard

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexis

    Beautiful.
    Amazing...

    wonderful, basically.

    5/5

    :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Really really really sweet poem amazing cmb thanks!

  • 11 years ago

    by Grace

    Sweet poem dude LOL =)

  • 10 years ago

    by halfwaytoinvisible

    That was a really sweet poem. Keep up the work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    That is beautiful! TWO THUMBS UP!!!!!!