You have two angels looking after you :P
its a beautifull poem made me feel all warm and cozy :) god you should see the weather here its cold, windy and rainy :( this poem helped :P 99/5 :)

Ohhh this was so cute!
It made me smile and go all mushy haha
Flow was perfect throughout, and I loved the imagery.
Beautiful collab!

That was SO amazingly beautiful you guys!!! I mean, so sweet and charming. Very very nice. And tell him I said that Gem...you both should know how amazing this poem is! As soon as I realized that you co-wrote it with him I had a whole new look at it. You are always talking about him on here and I can tell how much you love him, but this poem just brought it to a whole new level. Great job! 100/5!!! :)
~Midnight Sun

Very nicely done, like a running narrative. Feelings of boy and girl are portrayed excellently. Loved the poem, well done!

Warmest regards,

Steve

Gem and Marcus,

This was really nice. I loved the way you did it. First from him, then from her. Loved the title and the way you began and ended it. Great stuff.

Always,
Jeannie

Gem and Marcus
This poem is beautiful. Your love for each other shines in this piece. Excellent collab :)
Best wishes for a lifetime of happiness.
Love Cindy

5/5. Nice collaboration. Words are very perfectlyly fit as you see your love one.
Very interesting lines how it creates to the reader's imagination, seemed for me it's a walk in a cloud--that's probably why it's titled this way. Best Wishes.

Ray Blue

Wow now that as wonderful, i loved the collab and yall switching off like that.

That is so adorable! I love it. It took me awhile that it was both you and you future hubby both written this poem. I kinda squealed after that. This is a wonderful read!

How endearing. =) I wish I could get a chance to write together with "G", but he seems more interested in art than in poetry. -sighs-
This poem, as always, collab or not, is perfectly charming! Ah! that reminds me of a love which will prevail in the long run. Best wishes! Love, Debbie

This was another perfect poem by you, as always your poems are so romantic and so true......
you guys did a perfect job in this one as well, keep it up and i wish you the best.

He's my soul mate, my true love
The other half of me
He's the one who makes me feel
As happy as a girl could be

I loved these lines. You two have done a great job. wishing you the very best.
Gre888888888888 poem 5/5

What a beautiful love, and what a beautiful poem the two of you have written. Your love shines through the entire piece making all hearts sing.
Excellent!

Nice gemgem ^^

I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5

I love it , its very nice and beautiful good work 5/5

Hey your stuff's really good, your talented chick xx

I can see ya'll will be together forever you guys make beatuful poems together!!!

Wow.. this is very beautiful... Very nice!

Wow, what a beautiful poem! It's with so much love. Wish you both good luck. Great job!