To be true
by chance May 18, 2007
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To be true i love u 2,with all my heart and soul,so you know i stole your soulbut with out a doubt,thats not what im about , to steal your soul my heart with glow and i will love u forever!!!! |
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16 years ago
by Samantha
It's good.you might want to break up the lines and add more to it.was this for someone special or just another poem?keep it up you might get somewhere.
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16 years ago
Very good.. work on the length of it. it may make it more noticeable in the site lol
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16 years ago
by firexflys
You should try breaking in up in smaller lines so its easer to read but its cute keep up the good work
~firexfly~
