So unfair

by chance   May 18, 2007


To be fair, i dare you to break my heart then you'll see how bad i bark.

But without a bark i have not bite, but with that insite , i crumble to my kneesand say,

babe will u get back with me please!!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by just a little bit hurt

    Oh that makes me want to cry!! Lol!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    It is very good, In my opinion you can say alot more if it was longer

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    Like the others you should break the sentences down a bit to make it look longer.
    be more careful with the typing and spaces.

    It's good but very short just keep trying to make it longer.

    Samantha

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