Sleep

by Grim   May 18, 2007


The strange hour has found us once again.
The time when lucid thought becomes
liquid alive
Space opens wide manes
unconscionable greeting
Welcoming home the wondering son.

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  • 16 years ago

    by pandora

    The first time i read this, i thought, it was ok, the second time I read this I really liked it...nice work..i like something that sneaks up on me like this one did....i like the last line...it haunts me....

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    I enjoyed this one. Yes, it's short, but sometimes that's all that's necessary to get the point across. Nice write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Grim

    Glad you guys enjoyed this one. Sorry it couldn't be more but sleep is never very long ~for me.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really enjoyed it, it's well written but it could be a little longer...

  • 16 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    I like it wish there was more to it (; 5/5

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