Kind of frightening, but excellent! 5/5

My Lord!!!! Your poems just get my blood so boilded up ( In a good way) Their amazing you would be a great horror genre novelist!! Just outstanding xxxx Much love Roxy

I loved the transition from happy memories to melancholy..that made for a very powerful effect on the whole piece. flow is flawless throughout and the imagery is once again wonderfully done..There's not a thing i would chand about this..perfect.

This is truly amazing, the structure is perfect, the way it rhymes and the story it tells. In my eyes there's really no way this could be much better. Keep up the good work, and thanks for mine.

This is truly amazing, the structure is perfect, the way it rhymes and the story it tells. In my eyes there's really no way this could be much better. Keep up the good work, and thanks for mine.

I thought I understood it, but the end confuses me a bit. Is it actually a dream, or is he comparing it to one? It works either way, I suppose.

Still, I love the way it reads; blunt and ironic. It's definitely got a clear, important meaning.

Great write!

Nice poem i love the ryhming.....very simple but too emotional....^_^ 5/5

Amazing
I had a great picture that was painted in my mind
Luv it!
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5/5

Perfect rhymes reflecting your ability and creativity plus versatility. I like the way words strung each other to make it a good cohesive and poetically strong poem. Max ratings

Tc
Fsams

Wow another good poem.. short but still u got the right ambaince in here. and oh i love how u end up the last line of this poem.. it seems death is frightening and freaky yet it was still sweet to find peace at the end. great work!

Wow... I don't even know what to say. This poem is so well-done. I love the way it switches from the tragedies of dying to the happy memories of living...

One of the most unique & beautiful poems I have ever read. Great job.

This is a wonderful poem. the wording, flow and rhyming was all done perfectly. This really is an amazing poem. it deserves more then a 5. 5/5

Kalee

This poem is amazing
Congratulations
Keep up the good work
Best regards,Michelle
5/5 for sure

Wow, that was amazing. Strong emotions and overall very powerful. Imagery was so amazing, got all the pictures going through my head. Very unique work!
Beautiful. 5/5

Wow... this was really deep and dark.. keep up the good work 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess

Darkness becomes u...

5/5 poem !!!!! Great job!!!

Wow amazing.nice flow i like the way that the top line symbolizes the mans feelings and the bottom line sybolizes the mans thoughts..truly amazing.

One word: dayummm lol yes u might just be thinking that im only commenting u b/c u commented me and to tell u the truth im in school right now and shouldnt even be on this site but lol i can not stop reading your poems i alwasy like how u end them

Flows beautifully together...you have amazing talent. keep it up

5/5