Shes waiting

by lizzle   May 18, 2007


I can see that she weeps
when no ones there!
cause deep down she
knows they don't care!

she can see it
in there smile,she can hear
it in there voice!!this Lil girl
is left with just one choice!!

she knows one day
what Shel have to do!
but she is blind,she has
no clue!!!

that if she keeps going
Shel finally see,what its like
to be set free!

but she doesn't want to
wait!!its been to long!
this girl doesn't have the
courage to be strong!!

so Shel sit in herself
until days end!!with just
a knife as her friend!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem is very deep and emotional, I liked the story line and the feeling you put into it. But maybe if you just watch your line breaks alittle more and watch your spelling. But I can tell your a great poet, just keep writing. Wonderful job!
    <3Raych

    thanks for commenting on my poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    Amazing and beautifully sad
    (if that makes any sence)
    but i love it
    amazing
    -----------tara