This poems so beautifully sad, the emotions were so strong and deep the word choice amazing for something like this. I liked it alot, Felt strong emotions coming from it. Well done on this nicely written sad chilling poem~mel

Wow, i started to cry when i read dis poem...its very heartfelt.. i like this very much.. did this recently happen? and did u know these people... very well written.. 5/5

This had a great
Eye opener.
I loved it.
The mystery at the beginning.
Although, it just seemed a bit
Awkward at times.
For example:
They made it up
[[They won't make me cry]]
That just seemed out of place to me.
Maybe you can change it?
I don't know.
If you like it, you should keep it.
This is my opinion only.
Other than that.
Heartbreaking, m'dear.
5/5?

This is so sad...
it's so heartbreaking...
it's so beautifullu written...
i loved it...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Heartbreaking yes. Touches deeply. And these kind of things happen everyday. It's an amazing poem because it comes streight from your heart. I'm sorry for your lost :(
5/5

This 1 is soo sad..n heartbreaking write....powerful wordchoice....it's straighty from ur heart...maybe tht's y soo well expressed..Amazing peoce!

Good job on this 1!..kp writing!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Great poem. It's so sad. I hope his father is getting by. Anyways great write. I loved the format. Keep up the great work:) 5/5

Hey,
wow so sad, its really heartbreaking, the poem is absolutely perfect the rhyming is done great as wel as the flow, 5/5
take care,
stephanie

I am so sorry to hear this... you did express yourself well.. good job.. again, I am sorry.. my condolences go to the family involved and the friends affected.

Im so sad that he died..i really miss him!=[[[[ awesome poem..you should post it on his myspace so his dad can read it! i think he would like it! 5/5 all the wayyy baby!

Skylar, i havn't read this one until now, and i about almost cried...did ur parents actually sit u down after a wrestling meet? i was just wondering cause that would be sad :(

I think this is a really sad but its written really well.. the only thing is that its baout the boy AND HIS MOTHER so barely 17 (even though its a good title) doesnt fit with the poem and the last stanza

This poem seriously broke my heart into pieces, it was so sad. it was a real tear- jerker :( 5/5.