Good job, same thing with my mom and dad! 5/5 good job

I liked this i found the emotions to be powerful throughout it and the words strong and deep. The title caught my eye and kpt me interested. Well done with this i enjoyed it alot~mel

I know the feeling. only its my sister and i watched my pap die from smoking. hope everything works out

Great poem!

Smoking is bad. I liked your poem. 5/5.

Ray

Does ur mom really smoke? lol. 5/5 i like it!...........A-M-A-Z-I-N-G....hehe! mauh
connor------------

I hate cancer sticks
i just want to crush every single one
and like murder all of the people that make them
maybe one day they will ban them
5/5.