Letting you go

by Br0k3n   May 19, 2007


You chose this way, you wanted to be,
When I kept on saying no and no.
It was my entire fault, you never blamed me,
Now I want to let you go.

Since no one's perfect, neither am I,
You deserve a lot better than this girl here.
Believe me it's not easy, I found myself cry,
There's nothing more I want, than to hold you near.

But all this itches and causes pain,
I can't hold you back anymore.
A reason why I love the rain,
I see the sea drowning down the shore.

There are many better, you will see,
You'll just as happy as you should be.
In fact, theres no person worse than the one,
You won't let go until she's gone.

That's why I am leaving,
Honey, hold your tears.
Thank you for everything sugar,
You got rid of my fears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Brilliant. i really liked it. thanks for commenting and taking such interest in me. what made you choose me?

    g/a

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    That was an excellent piece of writing.You have talent.Good job.

    Kelsie

  • 16 years ago

    by Black night

    Aww, thats beautiful, so warm and heartfelt. A wonderfull piece of writing. Realy was. You will find that perfect person for you as well. dont worry abouyt that.
    5/5 from me - though it deserves much more
    -Black night-