Omg i love this poem. its so beautiful and im glad it has a happy ending. well done 5/5

This is one of the most beautiful, touching, sad, and just over all amazing poem I've read in a Really long time. Its just a sad reality in most homes. I don't have the words to describe how much I love this piece. It's just so perfect in everyway. Never stop writing. 5/5.

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That is a very lovely poem. dear god. i made me want to cry. this poem reminds me of that song by martina mcbride - concrete angel.

5/5.Heart rendering reality.Could relate to one of my recent aquaintance.It indeed is a sorrowful state.You deserve to be the best.Congrats.

Amazing.
much better than ANY of mine.
Please rate :)
its powerful, really clear message.

Fantastic.

That poems pretty cool! Your quite good at writing them... I like it.

Oh my God. Neve read anything like this that desribes the pain of being neglected in such a low age. Love it, amazing..

Great poem. well done. i love your choice of words. keep it up ok.

This poem is BEAUTIFUL It took my breath away really. It was just that good

An absolutely lovely ending to a lovely poem. this is def. a 5 out of 5.

Wow. thats touching.

Hi.i think you have done a great job with this poem.goes straight to the heart.its raw.i love it.these children are crying out for help and the govenrment does not do enough.they are our future yet these parents cannot raise these children.there is not enough support.if the government would take there D**** out of each others mouth for one second they may wake up ans see.anyhow very real.hope to read more.xxxx.

Aww. thats so sad and amazing, if i wasnt at school when i read that i would have cried

Ur witeting is amazing!! i love it!!

Wow.
That is...fantastic imagery.

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

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This is soo cute
and sadd
at the same time
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This is so touching and sad
i feel sorry for the people that go threw the pain
i feel sorry for the people that have been neglected, abused
and i feel sorry for you for having to be the one that had to put it into words and inform the world a lil bit more about all the pain that people go threw
but then i thank you for writting this because you have made it into something that peole will read and take into there heart
im sorry if this poem is about some one you care for or if it was friends or family i open my heart and give all sorrys for the pain that he/she had to go threw. i hope he/she is safe from harm now. that pain was/is harsh and no one should have to go threw it. once they get away from it they can be happy take it from some one who has went threw the pain.
it has touched me and i give my heart out to who ever else has or is going threw this pain u should not have to.
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Amazing choice of words... I absolutely loved it.