This poem is really good.the imaginative was perfect and the flow was good too.
so true
5/5
tc
best wishes

I'm moved beyond words, my goosebumps the only testament.

Your work touches, caresses, and begs to linger within.

You've been added to my favs!!

Hope you're smiling!!
anna

Wow. Such emotion, and understanding. The way you have portrayed the neglect, and taken it away, and given renewed hope to the life of your subject is amazing. You really are an incredible poet. Well done. xx

Omgah this poem was sad very sad and i loved it This poem was a good thinker your a great poet !!! ^^

Noelle

Very moving poem that has touched the hearts of many....... some do care!
Children are our future....

Well done baby.......your are....amazing!!

Great Poem... I must be the one to congratulate you first.. anyway, thank you verymuch... Lots of thanks Debs!!! A great image of Life reflected in your poem.. I call this a WINNER.. yeah.. Great piece Deb!! I love It..

Deb
What a wonderful choice for the winner:) Congrats.
Love Cindy

Nice choice of topic. Very moving. Childhood is such a fragile thing. You've captured that brilliantly.

Omg good job on this poem 5/5 it made me shed a few tears! keep writing!

Debby, congratulation to you too, you deserved it more than ever you know....

Wow thats deep

Amazing poem very sad a book you should read it’s called nobody’s child I think it may inspirer you.

Really Special, this one...Very Moving...and Real....I Thank You for this truly successful effort...

Omg its so sad that kids are actualy going true this it makes me cry

Wow wow wow this poems is excellent! u r really talented keep it up!

This is one of the best poems I've read on this site in a long time! Excellent!

Beautiful. the rhyme was perfect, the content magnificent, good work. 5/5

Amazing poem.
It's so beautiful, but yet so sad.
5/5
Wish I could give you higher tho.

I love this poem because i can relate sooo much. nice nice work!

I loved this! It made me cry remembering my family's adoption story! You did a great job!