Wow.talk about deep. 5/5

Dammnnn that was reallly good!
thanks for commenting on all my stuff!

mwah mwah, take care.
xxxxx

Heyy,
aww, that was sad.
Well written. 5/5
Sihinta xx

Hey fallen tears, thankz for the compliments, they are appreciated. this is a great poem, I love it and hate it at the same time. The poem rocks but what it represents hurts so much. Much love to you and your poem! 5/5

The memories that brings
So much grief
You shattered my world
Destroyed my belief

These lines really stand out.
Perfectly written piece and I love the rhymes.

Great poem its emotional and i luv it great job

5/5

Great Job. 5/5 I like it alot

Very good i like it
5/5

I love it
it is filled with emotion

Great write!
Filled with emotion and good rhymes!

That poem was real good man. it made me think about my ex girlfriend. yup love can be cruel sometimes.

Deep poem, it has a great meaning behind it! The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was great!

What a very sad piece you have penned. Very heartfelt.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Really good poem and I liked the bit that says:
'The memories that brings
So much grief
You shattered my world
Destroyed my belief'
Good rhyming 5/5

You give a pretty good over all view but I think if a reader was to really want to get in your thoughts I think you would have to put some exsamples in the structure of the twork just a thought Plot121

Lovely poem, with a nice flow and sheer grief depicted in a poetic form. I loved the flow and It really touches the heart. Your poems are really good

Tc

That was really great! From start to finish your words really amazed me.
"The love I dream of
Slips away like sand
Through my fingers
It barely caress�s my hand"
I like the way you described love like sand slipping through your fingers. It gave alot of meaning to your poem.That body that is in so much torture
Falling tears turning into dust
No longer can I endure
Your deceitful lust.
These were the perfect ending lines for your poem! 5/5

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