Kissed With a Drop of Fault

by Jane93   May 20, 2007


Kissed with a drop of fault
Powerless
Paralyzed
Just embrace the feeling
Fall to the ground
Feel the suspence
Grasp the thrill in your hands
The life in this feeling holds you captive and still
It drains away the significant small that is left of you

(this poem isn't finished, I just wanted some feedback on what I have please! I would appreciate it!)

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  • 16 years ago

    by greggallo

    I personally think that you are a great writer and im sure that if i ever met you we would get along very well :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda HEARTCORE

    It needs like, one or two more lines to finish it off, I think myself. Otherwise, it's very nice. Good job :)