Unforgiving sin

by judith redmount   May 20, 2007


I hear trumpet sounds
Angel sing
A cloud moving my way
The angel sing so clear
My elegant master
In completely white
Calling my name
Calling my name

As I reach out to Him
He shakes his head
Soft speaking voice
- Unforgiving sin
And turns his back
And leaves

Unforgiving sin
Unforgiving sin
As I open my eyes
Weeping and crying
I lie right on the bed

Thank God it was a dream
I think
Unforgiving sins
Unforgiving sins
Thank God it was a dream

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fredy

    Repeptition might prove hard to master, yet you are well on your way.:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    Thank you for this, You've mastered the whole repition thing, I'll give you that 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Meagen

    My Favorite!!

  • 16 years ago

    by kolorful

    I liked this poem...hope u can rate and comment mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Wow you better confess your sins. Might be a sign. I liked it. It was very suspenseful and the ending was funny. Good job.