~Bravo!~ Standing ovation Cindy!!! ~claps~
One of your best......a definite contender in Bob's contest!!! Love, Debbie

This is such a wonderful write! you are a very talented person! 5/5 please rate and comment some of mine!

-Ashley

Excellent write Cindy, very sad and heartfelt in every word, great job ,God bless you, your friend Tracy~~~5/5

Dear Cindy
I can only imagine how much it pained you to write this. I could feel your emotion pouring from the words.
These four little stanzas brought tears to my eyes. Incredibly moving piece , my friend!
Take care sweet lady
Luanne

"Within satin lined box
Dark blue suit and tie
Eternal Slumber
Wish everything was lies"

as sad it is to hear those words, i really love the "eternal slumber", it gives it a much more peaceful vibe, but still expresses the pain that you're feeling, very good work...5/5

Ahhh. Awsome and lovely. Like dis alot. Take care ur friend hassan 5/5

The flow and imagery were good. This poem was full of sad emotion. You did a really good job on this!

Oh gosh what an amazing poem, this is increadibly moving. A masterpiece cindy, well done xxx sian

How angsty and sorrowful this piece is! Ah! that was a very nice read. Good luck in the contest. Love, Debbie

You've done it again....touched my heart and left a tear ,I love your writes they are always so beautiful.

"Bright red flowers adorn
Final resting place
Hole dug, darkness waits
Only peace is God's grace"

I'm reduced to tears...
By that stanza as right now it means more than you know
5/5 Cindy
*Gem*

Kiss these lips goodbye
Missing lover's touch
Only left in dreams
Heartache's pain too much

I loved the way you have written these lines. Its really spellbinding.
God bless you Cindy.
I have always 5/5 for you.
Tc mwah

With love
Fsams

This is really good. you should tell me what you think of some of my poems..

-Chelsea-

Another sad peace, but their is always hope where God lies. great poem cindy xox sam

This is so heartbreakingly touching. I am truly moved by this piece, you have really written some wonderful stuff. I can feel the pain and sadness and can only pray this grants you even the slightest bit of release.

Take care,

GaryJ

This was a beautiful poem Cindy.. I can't decribe it, it's just wonderful. So much sadness.. I especially liked the line:

"Within satin lined box
Dark blue suit and tie
Eternal Slumber
Endless tears are cried"

I enjoyed that part a lot.. keep up the awesome work love! 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Nice poem!!!!!! i love it

Me likes =] vivid images and great use of words =] wooo =P

Matt x

Wow!.. excellent job.. short but still chilling. Great job! keep it up =]

Oh how very sad. very well written. you brought a tear to my eye. 5/5