Oh my gosh! I'm at school right now so I had to hold back tears when reading this. I couldn't imagine losing my grandma, I'm so sorry for your loss. This was a beautiful, beautiful poem and you've captured everything you must be feeling in it. xxx

Nanna, the pain of losing you
Is still raw and hurts to touch
The last three months have gone so slow
And I miss you so very much...
Excellent write very sad and heartbreaking poem, well written and very good ,sorry for the lost I know it hurts, take care your friend Tracy

Nanna, the pain of losing you
Is still raw and hurts to touch

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sad

Gem
My thoughts and prayers are with you. Your poem is beautiful. I feel your pain. It is a very deep hurt. I know she is looking over you and smiling. She has to be so proud of you. Take care Gem.
Love Cindy

What a very touching piece. My sincerest condolence for your loss. -hugs you- Stay strong and have a good courage. Love, Debbie

My days feel so empty without you here
But I still talk to you all the time
I hold pillows and talk tears to you
You're never far from my mind

^^^^^
Aww Gem hun this stanza just makes my heart ache for you. The loss of a loved one is so very painful.
I understand your pain dear one. I lost my grandmother a while back and the pain seems to always stay in our hearts.
When ever I miss her terribly I just close my eyes ....... and she is but only ... a memory away.
Your Nanna will always be in your heart sweets.
Touching poem Gem

Take care
lots of love and many hugs sent your way

This is so sad and touching, I can relate on my own personal level. Time may heal pain, but there is always a missing piece of someone special in your life. You've expressed the emotion so well in this.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

GaryJ

Awww Gem
I'm so sorry about your nanna
but it will get better in time
as for the poem
it was superb
the writing wasn't complicated but it all fit together nicely
very well done
you are so talented 5/5
love from
kaila

Poem is very great, u must b miss your dear..dont loose hope..i will pray for you. and thanks for you advice.5/5
take care

Wow, that was so sad. I'm not going to say that I understand what you are going through because I never lost anyone so close to me. I can only imagine the pain. It's always good to remember and cherish the good times. Why don't you write a poem of one of your fondest memories.
Take care.

Four months...like time is slipping through.
A very sad poem. I hope time will just stand still for once.

Nice poem. I liked it,5/5.
Take care.

Ray Blue

This is so sad...I had tears in my eyes by the end.
Beautifully written, the emotion and pain can clearly be felt.
Hope you're doing okay.

When tragedies like this strike there really is no amount of time that can heel a broken heart. I loved the poem and all the love and sadness in everyline. Excellent job 5/5

"But then sick realisation hits
As my heart takes another fall"

its a terrible feeling when you realize just how little progress you have made, when you're convinced that you have. i clicked on the title anticipating a "four month mark" of being together, and it was a shocking surprise to know that im not the only one that has thought about the time since a relationship has ended..amazing work, it'll all work out for you...you've got a plus side to the whole thing, you've churned out many deep, intense, and absolutely stunning poems because of it. keep it up, and hang in there.

Awww....Gem that was sooooo good! I'm so sorry your inspiration must come from personal loss. My deepest sympathy...but this was a beautiful poem and I truly loved it!
Charisma*

Aw Gem,
You will never stop missing her but it get easier to deal with. I know it feels like it wont but one morning you realsie that it does get better becuase it has to. Such a moving piece Gem. Keep your chin up and take care.

Kelly
xx

I am going through the exact same thing you are right now. And well you know that since we talked. Hun I know its hard and I am not going to tell you its going to get easier since I know you know that it wont and I wont tell you it is because I have lost many people and it doesnt and I dont want you get your hopes up. keep your head high since there wont be a day wehre I dont care. I will always be here for you through day and night. love yea

Chelsea

Aww.. Very sad, brang tears to my eyes. Writing wise its great! they just keep getting better and better, awesome work. 5/5

-Blessed

This poem was so sad.
i can relate to it very well.

My days feel so empty without you here
But I still talk to you all the time
I hold pillows and talk tears to you
You're never far from my mind

The wedding day is creeping up
Only two short years left to go
I wish you were here to plan and help
But wishing's not what you want, I know

beautifully written stanza
love the way you have written this poem
its so deep filled with emotions.
the imageyr was perfect and the rhyming was ok.

best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Awehh..so sorry about your loss Dear, I hope it gets better for you. An excellent poem in her memory, it`s filled with emotion and pain that the reader can feel it just by the way you portrayed it. Great job.

"There's still a sense of a huge great loss"

^^ I felt like you could have used just one or the other of 'huge' and 'great' it would flow a lot better that way.

"So I'm writing this tear-filled letter"

^^ LOVED that line !

5.5
:]