Scarred Deep

by lost dream   May 21, 2007


How Could You Do This TO Me
& Now I'm Broken In Two
I Could've Been There For You
But Why Why..... Did you Do That
was It fun,Or Just Made Me Gone
It's Over & What's Done Is done
Don't Think I'm Not Leaving You Babe
You Made Your Mistake ,Don't Try I Won't Be Back
I'd Love To But You Can't Erase The past
& Yes It Is Like That,You lied & That's A Fact

I Cried I'll cry Give Me Reasons
Please Just One Good Reason Why?
I'm Dying For Answers,Don't Do This to Another Girl Please

I'm Just Tired & Weak
You've Hurt Me & now I'm Scarred Deep.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Good job done..... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Syed

    Really well done job...feelings are well expressed

  • 16 years ago

    by fatal bliss is the best way to die

    I liked it i can relate to it ~melissa~

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I re-read the first stanza but I switched the first two lines and it sounded better. To me it didnt sound right the way it was so I just reversed it and, again, to me it sounded better. On this line:

    "I Cried I'll cry Give Me Reasons "

    I dont really get why you said I cried I'll cry. Thats all I had to say. People can relate to it. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by ScaredToSeeMe

    Good poem 3/5
    ~missindependent~

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