Coming Up For Air

Short and simple, but nice! And I love that you personify "love" and "water" by capitalizing them. I do similar things in a lot of my poetry. By capitalizing "lives" and not "dies" I'm thinking that power of the water living is much greater than that of the water dying. Which is cool. That's just what I got out of it. 5/5

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I love this!!

I love this. Have you tried writing Haiku's? I think you would be realy good at them. 5/5

I love this. :]