Just bye

by rene   May 21, 2007


I watch you
you smile
but turn away

he likes you
you love him
and I left to shame

I try
you care
but still the same

no touch
no kiss
no happiness

we laugh
we kid
to have it end

when he comes
I leave
with no word to send

you watch
I smile
to say goodbye

I like you
he loves you
and you him

so i leave
with no word
just bye

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  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    OMG. that is the best love poem i have ever read. perfect in every way. the flow was good (however the rhyme scheme could have been better) but it was awesome! I loved it...you get an add to my faves for this one....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia M

    I like this poem; it reminds me of myself and how sometime you think someone is the one but really you need to be reminded that there is someone made for you

  • 16 years ago

    by Iris

    Really good poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darkest Angel

    Wow i really like the flow of this poem keep it up
    -->Darkest Angel<--

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