That was inspirational absolultely beautiful writing there im guessing it was provoked by a partner cheating maybe it had that ring to it but be proud that was great

Good poem

This is by far the most inspirational poem i have read.... it's awesome=) and moving

This one has especially good rhythm and word choice. Using words that could sometimes seem awkward (like endeavor) has worked perfectly in this case. The title and content work together well to display the meaning, if that makes sense. Very well written!

Wow =) very nice poem =)
I liked it =) -- 5 / 5 --
Nicole xx

One the best poems i've read today and trust me that's very good

your servant:
D. Johnson.

Even the votes and comments on this piece dont do justice to this fine work of art.
you braught about the posative message across brilliantly and the rhyme sceme was well penned.