Very nice poem. I loved the that it had a nice flow. 5/5

Hmm... well done! You've managed to write a happy poem I actually like. Off the top of my head, yours is the first I've encountered that I wouldn't call sappy. :)

This was rather delightful to read. I love the part where laughter broke off the silence, it seems both of you are going on rather well. =) On the whole, it's a cute poem. A joy to read! ~Debbie

Great poem.

You look into my blue eyes,
and pull back my hair,
and promised me the world,
right then, right there.

It's superb. 5/5

Thank you to all of you... I am currently single.. this poem has nothing to do with me... I guess its what I wish for me in the future... if anyone wonders this... who this is about.. the future..

This was an interesting poem , quite enjoyeable to read liked it alot Very sweetly written. Well done with this nicely penned poem~mel

Awww.. veryy sweet poem.. the flow was amazing and very easy to read.. excellent job.. I really enjoyed it and it made me smile. Keep it up =]

This is an excellent poem, the flow is excellent in this one and the topic is sweet. I liked the last stanza best, it really ended the poem nicely. great job 5/5

Ur perfect night is really a perfect poem with overflowing feelings n good rhymes. wow great 5/5

=D well written. Your use of imagery was fantastic. Great job!