Storm Of Love

by Brittany C   May 22, 2007


Rain falls in sheets
from the dark gray clouds
leaden with moisture
ready to fall to the ground.

The wind is howling
as it pushes the rain
toward a small house
full of sweet love.

Lightning flashes outside
lighting up the dark room
but the two lovers don't notice.
There to wrapped up in each other.

He kisses her gently
wrapping his arms around her.
Gradually taking the kiss deeper
as he runs his hand down her body.

They explore each others bodies
slowly, gently till wonderful
flashes of sensations
temporally blocked out all else.

The atmosphere is electric.
You could feel it everywhere
and the air has grown thick
with love and passion.

While the storm rages on
just out side their window.
A storm just as strong screams
to be set free to grow.

It is their storm of love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by George

    Hmmm...sorry...just didn't really feel anything in it...I dont know, it just semed like it wasn't saying much of anything...and some of the words coices were...interesting...did you mean to use "groaned"?

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    This one is absolutely my favorite poem of yours, i like your choice of words and the flow was good, it was like I could see it right in front of my eyes like a story, I loved it!
    keep up the good work hun! 5/5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Some of your vocabulary was good but there were some parts it seemed like you were trying to hard for us to feel this passion and persnally i didn't feel it I think you need a stronger emotion then what you've got

  • 16 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    I see a connection here with "Love Is/ My Love"

    Your final stanza in that poem:

    'My love for you
    is like raging storm.
    Violent and strong
    yet gentle and beautiful.'

    Definitely the best of your three new pieces, I think. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    This was good... really good. great job.

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