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by peanut   May 23, 2007


As I stand here looking into empty, unseeing eyes,
of the cold being that i once called my best friend
And tears fill my eyes, as I wonder
What went wrong, how did it turn to this
I miss you my dear
Cant you see me here on my knees
Praying that god will give you a second chance
so that you may live again,
to prove this is not who you are
Here I am
Silently screaming out to you
begging you to wake up,
This is only a nightmare
You can awaken, but it must be soon
for every moment you spend in this cold dark place
is taking more and more life from you
Please come back to us, please
We need you, I need you
This cannot be how it ends

* This is not finished, it consists of lines which came to mind at the moment, i do not know if it makes sense, I am doubting it, nor do i know if i am even going to attempt to finish*

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  • 18 years ago

    by claire

    Ya, id love to see the finished version too. this is rlly good but a little rough around the edges.

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    Hmm, I'd love to read the finished version of this piece.
    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Alma

    Real powerful poem
    full of emotion it was real and deep
    loved it!
    beautiful poem!
    5/5

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