Pulling Me Back

by BrokenREALiTy   May 23, 2007


I'm trying here,
For that, you gotta give me props.
I'm trying so hard to let go,
To get my heart to stop.

But every time I'm almost there,
Every time that I come close.
You return to ruin everything,
Killing me, like a drug overdose.

One look and I'm done again,
I drop and hit the ground.
My strength gets pulled away from me,
And I lose my way around.

I've tried denying you,
I've attempted shoving you away.
But you're all that's ever on my mind,
Of every second of the day.

Please let me get over you,
I'm begging to remain alone.
Your presence beside me,
Is more than I can condone.

So here I am, pleading,
As my world's going black.
I'm asking you to let me go,
And stop pulling me back.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Yes i can totally relate.....and sumtimes its easier to tell sumone to just leave u alone so ur heart dont break even more! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I loved how you brought the title in at the end.
    Shows the importance.
    All in all I enjoyed the poem, its seemed a little easy tho.
    Not forced, but just not quite outstanding you know?

    It was still very good.
    A lot better than some I've read. =]

    Well done on your vocab as wel.

    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Wow.. I was really tempted to sing.. I really the ords.. so emotional.. and yet I reallly liekthe rhymes.. there isn't anything that I really change.. becuae I love it the way it is..but anyway good job and keep up the work .. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I loved this work...though it had a li'l slang used....it did have a good effect on the readers..lol...n the emotions well well penned n as such the flow was good but maybe better choice of words could add to the intensity...other thn that the poem is well written!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know how it feels to just want to stop loving and caring for somebody, but the harder we try and forget the more we end up thinking about them. The poem was nicely written and it had good flow - excellent job 5/5

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