I Can`t Deny...

by BrokenREALiTy   May 23, 2007


Bound by painful recollections,
Struggling with a heart so pure.
Shattering like that of broken glass,
A smile so demure.

Searching deep for any flaws,
What does she have that I don't?
Is it that you can't love me,
Or is it that you won't?

Like a shriveled rose,
Slowly falling apart, one by one.
Trying to repair the past,
And fix what's been undone.

So I'm waiting for an answer:
Why is she so much better than me?
What makes her everything,
That I can never be?

I'm tired of having to endure,
Being treated like dirt.
I can't tell my heart again,
"It`s okay. It doesn't hurt ."

How long till you come crying,
Telling me, "Fairy tales are all lies."
How long till you show me reality,
How long until my heart dies?

I'm asking you right now,
A question in which you must reply.
Why'd you give this love to me,
This love I can't deny...
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

* I know, "Dirt" so wasn't the right word, but I couldn't think of anything -.-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christina

    Great job.....plz check out sum of my work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Creativity and hard work were put in this poem very very good work another great piece of art

    laura

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    So I'm waiting for an answer:
    Why is she so much better than me?
    What makes her everything,
    That I can never be?

    it realy relates to me... nicely panned poem take care 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this one. For all the reasons I liked the other two poems of your's I r/r/c. Also I can relate with this one a little more than the other's. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    As always, you have took me to a different world where i think of my situation as its related your your poems.
    the rhyming was the greatest in this one. so greatly written. keep it up dear.
    5/5

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