A frozen moment

Interesting poem, but it seems as if you merely hurried, for some alien reason to me, to write this poem and post it. I think, especially for such a short poem, you need to add in some punctuation and also, most importantly, you need to start capitalizing your "I's". This poem was cute, and it seems sort of original for such a short poem.

Well done,
5/5
~Stephen White

I really like this poem even though i think you can write some more cuz your words flow so well, and i just love the way you ended it..."but my heart and the reels start up
and it beats with love again" that was my favorite line! great job 5/5

Lovely i loved your poem taekcare

Stepahie.. your poem is really short but yet so powerful ... I especially loved this part

"where i am with you and nothing else matters and nothing else is in motion"

love it! good job and keep up the work!!

I liked this, but I thought it could have been a little longer.
However, apart from that this was beautiful, straight to the point, the opening was powerful and the ending was intense and beautifully wrapped up.