Lol...yeah..i dnt think i understood much of this 1....but the repetition had a great effect on the poem...n it flowed well too..n i found this one is great..lol...though not your best certainly...it had it's own charm...5/5!
kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Your struture seemed a little un-neat to me but i cant critize on that because it may be your own personal structure. I liked the meaning portrayed. Although i think u could of used stronger words to describe better. THe flow was off in some places but other then that i think this was on a ok poem just needs a little work to make it stronger. Good effort 4/5

Nice poem and the compliments for the Northmen are really kind. Tell me sth are you a MUSLIM???
Good poem
TC
Fsams

...Considering its personal and remarkable details, this deserves a 5 from me though.

I liked how you repeated your poem.. very energentic.. I felt like standing up and sing it lol well good job and keep up the work 5/5

Clap, shout[[,]] and sing < comma.
every time< one word [used four times in poem].

great job, once again. loved the emotion, hun.
good flow as well.
punctuation, again.
but, it didn't effect this one as much as the others, I don't think.

4/5

I didn't really see this as a poem, more of a song maybe. I might try and sing it next time lol anyways good job I liked the repatition in this poem/song lol great job 5/5

I agree with ^^ it does kind of sound like a song, but i really enjoyed it, and the repition was great and i think thats what made it sound like a sing in a way, but good job, 5/5

I liked this poems repitition, but there lacked a full flow.

4/5.

This is an excellent poem. I love it. It's great and the happiness and joy radiates from this poem. It's awesome that you found something that made you happy and I love this poem!! Good job. I like the repititon, it was used well. 5/5

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This was a very good poem and I don't think that I've ever heard them sing. *5/5*

Alyson

I loved the repition in this poem you have used take care 5/5

I'm not much into Christian or folk-like music, of which strikes me very much-so with this poem. I didn't enjoy it as much as other poems I have read, and it sort of hit me as "corny". I did enjoy the flow of the poem, which was wonderful...

Still, 5/5

~Stephen White