Haiku* The Naissance

Hmm, well, dun rly know how 2 write a haiku poem,...so don't really know how to comment, juz 1 thg, duno if it's a poem, but it could be longer maybe? I mean if it is...=)

This is good, since it is your first attempt.. I like it, however, I think that you should give it a different title..

Hope