Comments : Broken mirror

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Good poem, I loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Woow .. it's v.v. good poem .. a lot of sadness but nice way .. keep it up ...

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a sad and a painful

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was amazing! So much power and emotion, and I liked the metaphor of the broken mirror how it blames itself for the death. Thats different unique, that was simply amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Gosh! that was powerful emotion.. seems u had really flowed all the deep feelings in here. and i really love title it really sounds very interesting.. love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    Gosh isnt this just so true for some people.
    i really like this poem the wording is excellent, well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    This one was a bit off for me, the meaning was great. The idea was great, but the flow was off and it just didn't register right in my mind.

    " saw " [in a few lines] should be " seen "

    overall you did a great job, don't get me wrong.
    it just wasn't something I was real fond of.

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Again you have great work i love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    "Broken mirror, tell me why
    Sing me your sad lullaby
    Why did you decide to break?"

    poetry couldn't get any better for me, its beautiful...moistened my eyes...

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem is absolutely amazing! The flow was brilliant for the rhyming scheme you chose (which I thought was very original and refreshing). The word choice was excellent but what really made this poem was the phrases you've used. It's the way that was written that made this poem so brilliant.

    Very high marks from me. I loved it! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by PlasticSmile

    Wow, only two words can describe this poem, simply amazing!

    I love the idea of this poem.

    I abosolutely LOVED it !

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Wow nice poem. i like it alott.. keep up the good work.