Nest

by sibyllene   May 24, 2007


I cling to you,
you drain my life away, oh
keep it warm, oh,
keep it warm and say
you always will, my
predator of words, my capturer of verbs
and turns of phrase; though all
these many days have fallen cold,
the whisper old as withered branches sway,
the whispers say
(as you will say) you'll
keep it warm, you'll
keep my small love warm
and tucked away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellently written piece, so emotional and touching.
    I rarely read a love poem that I like, but this one is totally amazing.
    Keep writing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful job!
    Excellently penned poem...different yet nice!
    5/5 =)
    Good job!

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jordan

    I'll start off by saying that I couldn't choose which part of that poem I like best.

    It was all absolutely wonderful! The flow was perfect - I love it! The rhyme scheme - I'm sure many will think that it's repetitious and stupid, but I thought that it was superb...that's a good way to keep one idea firmly planted in the reader's head. The subject of the poem, whatever the nest represents kept dancing around in my brain. 'Tis a very lofty poem...short, sweet, and further to the point than many poets could reach.

    Wonderful job!

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