I like the emotion i got outa this. it started more intense and then it all subsided. nicely done haikus. the vocab was also great. 5/5.

I really liked this alot. i found your word choice to be beautiful for such a stunning haiku. The imagery flawless. Well done with this. Words so sweet and enjoyable~mel

This is excellent, well done. i like how you used completely different words in this poem. really made it fresh and enjoyable to read.

5/5 David

This is perhaps the best haiku ive read yet cindy, love the imagery of this one! as always its a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Haiku's are my favourite nature poem, they are just full of imagery.
I loved this one, it was beautifully penned,
an awesome read, my friend.
Love Tara-Kay

This Haiku has a brilliantly vibrant imagery and powerful descriptions. A delightful read, as always. Love, Debbie

Very well done! I can almost feel the heat and see the lightning.....5/5 Love, Debbie

Now this is a cool poem, very nicely written and just so refreshing, short simple and yet so much is said in a unqiue way. Beautiful poem yaar.

You are simply rocking these days.. :o)

all the best and take care

Wow dear Cindy sweet words with beautiful descriptions. awsome piece, less words with great imaginative n creative meanings 5/5. How u dear!

With love
Fsams

Sweet! 5/5

Oh Cindy you put me in the mood for summer with these two Haikus!! I love summer especially the rain or hearing the tree branches sway from the soft wind...haha I want to just go run around outside now :-)
I enjoyed this one!
Chels

Very interesting, your so knowledgable about poetry and do it oh so well :) xox

Cindy, its brillaint piece, beautiful and real imagery of storm. A perfect haiku.Loved it dear.

Take care
chavii.

Wow!...excellent haiku..few words which captured clear descriptions..great work!
I loved the imagery created....Perfect beauty!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Very meaningful..keep up the good work...ahaha

There is no other way to describe this, your short description was flawless, the style and restrictions made this poem even better. if it was longer it could not get any better than it is now.

5/5 David