Short and sweey 5/5 keep up the good work Steve

Sorry I meant short and sweet

I agree with Steve, it's short and sweet yet it holds such depth to it.
Very poignant
Keep writing ok!
5/5
*Gem*

Im so Proud of you hun!
As I said before I love this poem.. it's just so full of emotion!
Amazing Mirandy,
Elaine[Paula]

This is really gOOd
as everyone has been saying
short & sweet
lOve ITTTT!!

5/5

xOx shaylee

Love it.

maybe u should add on to it a bit but i also love how such a short poem shows so much.

btw welcome to the site =) if u want to check out some of my poems u can

xoxo
Tess

Miranda, I Like Your Poems They're Very Unique.

Very nicely written that shows you are a great person and you are a great poet, keep it up dear.

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

I thought this was a short poem.. It could of had more detal added to it. Thats ok.. I still thought it was good.. 5/5

Who ever this person is I think you still love him because you heart wasn't ready to make that change fast. Ask that person why is so hard to love me? That's how I got my man back.

Very nice.
It was short yet, sweet.
It held many emotions that just hits the reader's heart. Fantastic job. (: 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.