Comments : Holiday

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Cool, everybody hates the last day because they just want to have fun for a few weeks. You showed this well xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    I'm homeschooled so I don't relate to this one, but I thought it was great!

    ~*Alex*~

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was awsome.. I really liked this.. it rhymed and flowed really well...

    I think of what i have read so far this is your best poem.. very good job.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zeus

    Wow. this is a cool poem. I can totally relate because now school seem to be longer since its coming to an end. Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't think that their is a greater feeling when your in school then hearing that final bell ring releasing you for the summer. To bad it never seems to last that long, always goes by way to fast. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow..i got to say i have not reada poem like this one on the whole site..lol because every single one ive read is either about depression or love etc..but this is a more varied subject..that long wait for the school day to end, just before a holiday! yay! lol great right mate, plenty of figurative language and imagery..dont stop writing! xx