Another fantastic pome darling! Sorry about the confusion.. I really like the Heart song Crazy On You... lol I give it a 5/5 as always love!

Fantastic poem really really sad even more sad that it is true:( but you wrote it very well i hope more people read this to get it heard great job again

keenan

Bryan
What a heartbreaking piece. You did a wonderful job writing this story to verse.

Now a sweet child of nearly three,
died one snowy night for the world to see.
How cruel life is, now its too late,
his life has ended, given by fate.

These lines brought tears to my eyes.
Hope this touches the hearts of your readers.
Take care Cindy

This story you read is of such a shame. Beautifully sad poem you have written here yet again Bryan. Heartfelt, capturing, and emotional. Well done. Truely amazingly written. ~mel

I like this -- this was quite a persuasive write. Well, for me, it was. I have a question: did the parents of the ill-fated child abandon him? Fantastically touching, as always. Keep it up, hun! Love, Debbie cakes

Loved it! At first when I read the title and how you said it was another sad child story I thought it would go along the same lines as Martina McBride's song Concrete Angel, which still makes me cry everytime I hear it as your poem did when I read it. Yes, sadly, this does happen everyday =[

Anyhow, one thing..

"born early from what his parents done."

^^ You could add a "had" between parents and done to tie it together and better the flow.

Great job Babe! I know I haven't been reading a lot of yours or commenting, but I will try to do more!

5.5
=]
<3

Beautiful and so sad.

Wow oh so true sad story , 5/5 very nice, i loved the story well you know what i mean.

This is such a sad story. And the most heartbreaking thing is that it's true. Love how you could put such a tragic thing into a beautiful poem. Excellent write. 5/5

` Liz =]

I cried 5/5

Sad stuff you got here 5/5

This is so sad and true in many cases. You did a wonderful job. 5/5

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Wow - this is an amazing poem, amazing message, beautiful writing - i'm almost crying, no joke

Well written

Sad but true. -T. Jane

This is so depressing. and it is sad to thing about this kind of stuff happening. i wish people would see how dumb they are when this kind of stuff happens and how much they are hurting people. who knows...maybe your poem will help people see that.

This is so sad and also something i can relate to

A sad poem.
Very beautiful.
I really like the last four lines, but the whole poem is great.
Nice work!

This is so sad and true... *tears* through the whole poem....loved it! 5/5

Omg this is really good i loved it the flow of words I LOVED IT keep up the good work 5/5