This seems like a hard style to do ciao, but you did it great, for some reason it glitched, but its easy to edit the glitches, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming babe!!!

Wow... I don't even know what to say. This poem is so amazing... I love the way that you write! This part's my favorite:

Hold your head up high as you yell to the sky
That youre finally over him.
What a waste of time, leading with your mind
Is better than committing the sin.

Once again, wow... Keep up the great writing!

Oo, I liked this. I really like this style, and you did it justice. It's somewhat catchy, a bit like a pop song (haha, that's a compliment, really.)

"You know what to do, and yes, it involves you" - Here I thought you used 'you' too many times, it messes with the flow somewhat.

Anyhow, nice job.

Great job. The structure was nice, as well as the wordings.

The tear in your heart wishes you wouldn't start
This nonsense all over again
[[Honestly, I hate when people don't finish a line like that and make it two..]]

Goodbyes are always the end.
[[I don't know why, but I really like that line..]]

Hold your head up high as you yell to the sky
[[...yell to {I think to should be "at", but that's just suggestive wording} the sky {;}"]]

You know what to do, and yes, it involves you
No matter if it's wrong or right.
[[I love this rhyme and the whole meaning here. Perfect.]]

Okay. Now, this poem would not been anywhere near as good had you put it in any other form. Nice picking there.
Now, I didn't realize this was a poem about a boy; I was just reading and making up my own story, but you gave it away at the end. Don't do that; let the reader explore with their memory what /they/ want the poem to be. =]
But, I really enjoyed it, as I enjoyed the ending. Nicely done. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5